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ive already lost you by ~boo-88:iconboo-88:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen > Free & Blank Verse


sitting in a dark room
waiting for you
knowing deep down in my heart
that you will never come

hoping you return my calls
just letting me know your ok
slowly losing all hope
that you'll call me back today

missing you like crazy
hoping that you'll be here
slowly losing my mind
slowly losing my heart

i know i should give up
but i know if i do
i'll lose me too
since i've already lost you
©2006-2010 ~boo-88
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i dont really like it..

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~mimzy91 Jan 27, 2008, 7:25:55 AM
i love this :)

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~boo-88 Jan 27, 2008, 11:37:19 AM
thanks very much :) and thanks for the fav :hug: :)

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Love is not a snooze button on your alarm clock because when it goes off the first time in the morning the thought of your loved one makes it impossible to fall back asleep
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~mimzy91 Jan 29, 2008, 1:19:29 AM
:) anytime! :glomp: :rose:

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~Jarred88 Apr 22, 2006, 10:11:19 AM
I love this peice so much, because i can relate to it. Very well written.
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~boo-88 Apr 22, 2006, 7:57:19 PM
thank you :)
and thank you for the fav:)

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Love is not a snooze button on your alarm clock because when it goes off the first time in the morning the thought of your loved one makes it impossible to fall back asleep
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~RandyZoo Apr 6, 2006, 5:10:46 PM
Nice.. rather sad.. I know the feeling well

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~Kotman Mar 17, 2006, 8:15:53 PM
Sad...I like this one...Kinda reminds me of the situation im in atm
Love the last stanza

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~boo-88 Mar 17, 2006, 8:19:10 PM
:) thanks :hug:
thanks for the fav too

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Love is not a snooze button on your alarm clock because when it goes off the first time in the morning the thought of your loved one makes it impossible to fall back asleep
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~Kotman Mar 17, 2006, 8:22:25 PM
anytime

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~Emo Ninja Angel~

"There's a method to my madness, all I have to do is find it"

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